my collaboration

Today I was learning about collaboration
The things I found easy were finding videos
The things I found hard were finding 5 rules

My Reading Project

Rebecca's Olympic Reading Project

Quality blog comments

Walt: write quality blog comments

Read the following blog posts and leave a quality blog comment.

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Introduction:  Talofa Lava my name is Rebecca I go to E .H .S Iam 8 year old

omplement in a specific way: I like the pizza picture.

Add new information: next time you might need to put a capital letter for the of your school.

Finish with a question:what your type of pizza.

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Introduction: hi my name is Rebecca I go to E.H.S. school

Compliment in a specific way: I like the way you described her .

Add new information: maybe next time you could say something more positive instead of punches.

Finish with a question:what your favorite color.

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Introduction: hi my name is rebecca I go to E.H.S.

Compliment in a specific way: I like it how you put a picture of yourself.

Add new information: maybe next time you can tell us about yourself.

Finish with a question: what is your favorite color.

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Introduction: hi my name is rebecca and I go to E.H.S. school

Compliment in a specific way: I like the way you put picture in your work

Add new information:I like how you put all about yourself

Finish with a question: maybe you should change the color of the back round  I cant see the words

When you have finished this task please complete these tasks:

Check our class blog timetable and leave a comment on each person's blog.  Please also visit Kaniere school’s blog and leave a

Playground Setting

Plan
First sentence - hook	incredible
Sensory words (look, feel, hear, smell)	I see people on the swings, flying  fox, ladders and slides. I feel slippery slides and when i do the hard stairs the grass is wet and fluffy. I smell  yucky bark and a Yucky  mud. I hear Birds flying on the tree and Scripting.
Last sentence - where would you rather be?	I rather stay the park

I see people on the swings, flying fox,ladders and slides.

I feel slippery slides and when i do the hard stairs the grass is wet fluffy.I smell yucky bark and a yucky mud.I hear birds flying on the tree and scripting.I rather stay the park.

Plan
First sentence - hook	incredible
Sensory words (look, feel, hear, smell)	I see the ocean and the people are swimming in the ocean and saying on the sand with they bick and they sun grime. I feel soft sand , water. I hear a bird flying up the sky and the tree. I smell yacky sand and wate.
Last sentence - where would you rather be?	I rathes to stay at the bech.

I see the ocean and the people are swimming in the ocean and saying on the sand with they bick and they sun grime.I feel soft  sand,water.I hear a bird flying up the sky and tree.I rather to stay at the beach. Because it so hot inside your house.