This is a record of my learning at Edmund Hillary School, Auckland, New Zealand.
Hi Rebecca my name is Roseena and I really like your story but next time add more detail.
Hi Rebecca, I enjoyed reading this it made me laugh. Next time you might like to describe the house more. Why is it messy?
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Hi Rebecca my name is Roseena and I really like your story but next time add more detail.
ReplyDeleteHi Rebecca, I enjoyed reading this it made me laugh. Next time you might like to describe the house more. Why is it messy?
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