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Friday 2 September 2016

Playground Setting




playground | by Tim Gillin



Plan
First sentence - hook
incredible
Sensory words
(look, feel, hear, smell)
I see people on the swings,
flying  fox, ladders and slides.

I feel slippery slides and when i do the hard stairs the grass is wet and fluffy.

I smell  yucky bark and a Yucky  mud.


I hear Birds flying on the tree and Scripting.
Last sentence -
where would you rather be?
I rather stay the park




I see people on the swings, flying fox,ladders and slides.

I feel slippery slides and when i do the hard stairs the grass is wet fluffy.I smell yucky bark and a yucky mud.I hear birds flying on the tree and scripting.I rather stay the park.

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