Plan
First sentence - hook	incredible
Sensory words (look, feel, hear, smell)	I see the ocean and the people are swimming in the ocean and saying on the sand with they bick and they sun grime. I feel soft sand , water. I hear a bird flying up the sky and the tree. I smell yacky sand and wate.
Last sentence - where would you rather be?	I rathes to stay at the bech.

I see the ocean and the people are swimming in the ocean and saying on the sand with they bick and they sun grime.I feel soft  sand,water.I hear a bird flying up the sky and tree.I rather to stay at the beach. Because it so hot inside your house.